As mentioned in my previous post – NM2208: Assignment 1 (Design Process), I decided to go with the oral care sketch.
Some critiques I received on my full roughs during Tutorial 1:
- Full Rough #1
One of the main issues for Full Rough #1 is the dental floss. Using the dental floss to spell my name seemed a little unrealistic and unnatural. Had to agree with the class that it seemed like an easy way out to integrate my name into the design.
- Full Rough #2
Similar to Full Rough #1, there was an issue with the name formation with dental floss. Also, the mouthwash seemed a little out of place. It seemed a little neither here nor there since it was kind of defying gravity by not flowing into the mouth. I guess I was trying to show the extensiveness of my oral care obsession, but because it was dangling in mid air, it didn’t have much of a significance. One of the pretty good suggestions was to let the mouthwash form an alphabet of my name.
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